story sketch: the henchmen's hitch [update: 09-14-2011]

[meeks]

This is a scene from The Henchmen's Hitch, a poem by ysabetwordsmith about what happens when a pair of not-so-evil henchmen named Nib and Brod try to bring their master a magical sword.





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Re: Thank you!

[the-vulture.livejournal.com]

Yeah, the horses, but also... I kinda expected Brod to be bigger, maybe even a little (forgive the pun) broader.

Re: Thank you!

[ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com]

Hmm ... maybe it would be easier to make Nib smaller? Which would make both Brod and the horses seem bigger, though I'm not sure how well the proportions would work out.

Re: Thank you!

[the-vulture.livejournal.com]

That would work best to preserve most of the current composition, but those gates would have to be shrunk down some, too, or made to appear more Mordor-esque.