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This is a scene from the first book set in [personal profile] clare_dragonfly 's Chatoyant College, the only american university that has classes in magic alongside its more conventional course offerings. All is not what it seems on what, at first, appears to be a normal college campus, and freshman students Annie, Edie, Corrie, Dawn, and Rico soon find themselves fleeing the real reason the nearby forest is forbidden.

cleaned-up sketch:
Annie, Edie, Corrie, Rico, and Dawn running through the forest

rough sketch:
Annie, Edie, Corrie, Rico, and Dawn running through the forest
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Re: I like it but...

Date: 2011-04-19 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meeksp.livejournal.com
Ok, the angle of the oboe is easy enough to adjust.
Thank you for pointing out the issue with Corrie's arms! I did want to suggest that running is a familiar activity for her, but I may have pushed it too far in that direction. Even after many years of studying body language from an artistic standpoint, it's still a bit like writing a foreign language for me, so it helps to know when I haven't quite got it right.