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This is a sketch from a scene in Husband by Hand, a variation on a european fairytale featuring [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith's character Fiorenza the herbalist. In this story, Fiorenza uses her skill to help Bettina, a girl from her village who kneads to find a well bread husband.



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Thank you!

Date: 2011-11-11 08:16 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ysabetwordsmith
The improved detail is good, especially on Bettina.

I think the background is too dark now, though; the table legs, skirt, even the herbs vanish into the shadows.

Re: Thank you!

Date: 2011-11-11 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
the_vulture says (as LJ is currently too messed up for OpenID to work): I agree. Whilst I really love the addition of detail in this image, I couldn't help but think "Were they baking at night?"