Date: 2011-07-19 03:21 am (UTC)
I really like how you manipulated the tone to give the sense of a singular, intense light source. Nicely done!

This effect could be magnified by extensively extending the shadows of the characters, which would provide a very pronounced break in the light, given their proximity to the light source.
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