Keeper: My second-favorite. I love the chalky style and the contrast between foreground/background. More, please!
Fairy ring: Again, I like the chalk, though it's different here; cute.
Rat race: Probably has a good story behind it, cute, not as gripping in the imagery though.
Egg hunt: Most interesting imagery in terms of surprise, good colors and framing. I'd like to see more of this.
Not your usual: Cute dragon, cute concept. I actually like this one the way it is. I'm not sure more detail would add much to its charm.
Reading the future: My favorite! Much love. This is adorable already, and would really benefit from added precision. I wouldn't want to lose the soft edges, but you could put more detail into the room. Also you've got a whole bookcase of books -- if you write small, you could put titles on those, or if you're worried about size, maybe face some of them outward. I love titles on books in art.
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Date: 2011-04-24 07:19 am (UTC)Hippo: meh.
Keeper: My second-favorite. I love the chalky style and the contrast between foreground/background. More, please!
Fairy ring: Again, I like the chalk, though it's different here; cute.
Rat race: Probably has a good story behind it, cute, not as gripping in the imagery though.
Egg hunt: Most interesting imagery in terms of surprise, good colors and framing. I'd like to see more of this.
Not your usual: Cute dragon, cute concept. I actually like this one the way it is. I'm not sure more detail would add much to its charm.
Reading the future: My favorite! Much love. This is adorable already, and would really benefit from added precision. I wouldn't want to lose the soft edges, but you could put more detail into the room. Also you've got a whole bookcase of books -- if you write small, you could put titles on those, or if you're worried about size, maybe face some of them outward. I love titles on books in art.