meeks

Lovely work, but I have one bit of criticism to offer: to my eyes, at least, the close-up image on the right seems to depict an older, more mature individual than the child in the left-hand segment. Looking at the left-hand close up in isolation, I'd interpret that as being a drawing of a late teen or young adult rather than the "little girl" of the poem. Sorry that I'm not enough of an art critic to be able to clarify what precisely gives me that impression -- hope this is useful to you even without that detail.