I'm glad that this got updated. I love the greater detail in the characters, on the table, and the pictures in the background.

Some things in this picture look thicker than seems ideal, like the pen (brush?) in her hand and the lacings on her bodice. Also, most garb has a combination of patterns -- usually on the bodice so you can match it with lots of things, but given the detailing on the arms, skirt would probably be better to fancy up a bit. Maybe a bit of white trim, slightly above the hem?