I like this very much! The gnome (who ought to get a name soon, hmm) looks very much like a cross between one of those garden statues and a living being, which is wonderful (and great for camouflage)! And the rabbits are adorable - even if they are little bulldozers of garden destruction in the poem. >;)
My only tiny nitpick are the glasses the lady is wearing: are they half-moon glasses? If so, those are typically bifocals and since Our Narrator is in her early 30s, I don't think she's old enough for those yet! On the other hand, if they're very squat ovals and I just can't tell that from the rough sketch, you can ignore this criticism. :)
Thanks so much! I'll post linkbacks as soon as I can.
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I like this very much! The gnome (who ought to get a name soon, hmm) looks very much like a cross between one of those garden statues and a living being, which is wonderful (and great for camouflage)! And the rabbits are adorable - even if they are little bulldozers of garden destruction in the poem. >;)
My only tiny nitpick are the glasses the lady is wearing: are they half-moon glasses? If so, those are typically bifocals and since Our Narrator is in her early 30s, I don't think she's old enough for those yet! On the other hand, if they're very squat ovals and I just can't tell that from the rough sketch, you can ignore this criticism. :)
Thanks so much! I'll post linkbacks as soon as I can.