story sketch: husband by hand [update:11-10-2011]
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This is a sketch from a scene in Husband by Hand, a variation on a european fairytale featuring
ysabetwordsmith's character Fiorenza the herbalist. In this story, Fiorenza uses her skill to help Bettina, a girl from her village who kneads to find a well bread husband.

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Thank you!
Date: 2011-11-11 08:16 am (UTC)I think the background is too dark now, though; the table legs, skirt, even the herbs vanish into the shadows.
Re: Thank you!
Date: 2011-11-11 04:15 pm (UTC)Re: Thank you!
Date: 2011-11-11 07:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-11 01:56 pm (UTC)Husband-bread looks suitably creepy.
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Date: 2011-11-11 05:07 pm (UTC)Wow!
Date: 2011-10-07 07:48 pm (UTC)Most promising areas for refinement: the women's faces, Bettina's locket, and the leaves of the herbs. I'd leave the dough-man fairly plain since he hasn't been baked yet.
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Date: 2011-10-07 08:28 pm (UTC)And the heart necklace draws the eye very nicely.
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Date: 2011-10-07 09:01 pm (UTC)...a girl from her village who kneads to find a well bread husband.
The puns did not go un-groaned at!
*laugh*
Date: 2011-10-09 01:15 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 03:19 pm (UTC)Thanks for pointing it out. XD
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Date: 2011-10-07 09:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-07 10:12 pm (UTC)Now we have a punster leavening us with laughter!
;D
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Date: 2011-10-08 01:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-08 02:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-08 02:56 am (UTC)Yes...
Date: 2011-10-09 01:17 am (UTC)Re: Yes...
Date: 2011-10-10 03:21 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-08 10:53 am (UTC)Yay!
Date: 2011-10-09 01:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-10 03:18 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-10-16 10:01 pm (UTC)I also like the unique herbs.
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Date: 2011-11-11 07:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-11 02:30 pm (UTC)Would a baker of the period put windows into the room that contained his oven? Or would that have been logistically impossible? I'm not really sure of this detail.